Saturday, April 11, 2009

Raven's Challenge 58

It is Saturday already and we have to be out reading all those wonderful stories.
Today we give out our ninth dragon award. Click HERE to see our gallery of winners.
You know we dragons write great stories too.
No! We are not humble.
Here is our mega challenge for today.

Good Bad Luck
Portico H. Alabaster was really down on his luck. He wanted to call his sister in Detroit but he had no iPod or even a cheap cell phone. He had no job and there was very little demand for old acrobats even at grocery store openings. Indeed there were now far more store closings than openings and he was told it was all the fault of some mysterious people who worked in cubes with computers. Somehow they failed to be good interpreters of the housing market which collapsed and brought everything else down with it. If he had enough energy he would have hated them but it just didn’t seem worth the effort. So he laid on the ground most of the day watching the bumble bees fly by making dandelion stops along the way. Even the waving of the chartreuse grass interested him. Not that he could really see that well. He needed desperately to see an optometrist but strenuously resisted because acrobats couldn’t wear glasses. He thought of cutting some of the wild flowers but had no scissors.. He was very lucky there was no poison ivy in the area because with his eyes he would never have recognized it.
Feeling thirsty he went to spend his last four dollars on a case of pop at the grocery store just as the ceiling fan fell and it cut into the back of his leg.He would never be an acrobat again.
Finally his luck had changed. The very generous insurance settlement would take care of him for the rest of his life. Life could be good.

After today our gallery wall will be full. We will start a new wall in the fall. But now we are taking a break from the stress of deciding whose great story is the best.

13 comments:

  1. Thank goodness he was insured. Sooner or later he would have been too old to be an acrobat I would imagine so the fan actually did him a favour falling on him like that! Every cloud has a silver lining! :)

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  2. well, that fan accident sure was a blessing in disguise.

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  3. Good story, full of "surprises"! :)

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  4. Well I'm sure glad that Portico could at least afford the insurance premiums during such hard economic times. Great story and thank goodness the insurance paid...Happy Easter to you and the rest of the Dragons. And have a much well deserved rest from the Dragon Award.

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  5. You never know till you know, do you? Lovely ending. I'm a sucker for a happy one.

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  6. You dragons do indeed spin a fine yarn!

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  7. I like this story. Glad it had a happy ending.

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  8. My first visit to the dragons.
    Portico Alabaster - how clever! Would love to hear the story behind his name.

    Glad everything worked out in the end.

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  9. Good job once again, dragons! I love a happy ending. I just hope that Portico can find a way to incorporate his love of acrobatics in his new life. Maybe he could open a youth club. :)

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  10. You dragons rock!! Full of imagination and writing skills too.

    So, award #9 is, at least for now, the last one you'll be bestowing? Then it's even more special than I realized to have been awarded with it. I got the first ever... and now the last for now. How cool is that!!

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  11. You know Dragons, all the stories are so great, I completely understand your vacation. I would hate to have to pick! You should be happy I didn't post my story until way late, so you didn't have to worry about judging mine. (Which you would have rejected for being too long.)

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  12. I like the part about laying down and watching the bumble bees :)

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  13. I enjoyed the story. The acrobat seemed to be trying to make the best of things, and though it looked for a moment like the story might be sad at the end, everything turned out for the best!

    Stephen from Scottsdale, Arizona, USA
    http://stephen-has-spoken.blogspot.com/

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