Friday, May 29, 2009

Flass 55 and Raven

With a nod to Raven and Quilly
( This week's Raven's words were horrible as usual)

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

Every week a nice lady named Raven gives us fifteen words and phrases to use in a story. Here we try to use those words and phrases in a flash 55.This week's words are:: parasite, meals on wheels, crows, it's my fault, everything but the kitchen sink, on sale, patriotism, the love of my life, library card, common sense, blackmail, California, stethoscope, postage, crank

Parasite Thomas Crows decided to blackmail me and it’s my fault lacking patriotism and common sense..
Now he wants everything but the kitchen sink, my stethoscope and library card or he will; tell Nancy Crank, the love of my Life, about my California scam, putting the meals on wheels food on sale for postage .

And Now for something completely different. A flash 55 quivel. Something that looks like a poem, uses at least three of Quilly’s words and has five words to a line for eleven lines. Click on the special words for definitions.

A Not very Erotic Quivel

He was a solid niddering
That’s why he was fleeing
So he left his amanuensis
Who liked to really kiss
Her lambition of his feet
Was seen as really neat
No tyro at erotic things
But fraid of wedding rings
A lugent girl she became
When they said his name
Now a statue gaining fame


  1. Oh my goodness've done it again. Brilliant...a statue gaining fame .. love it :)

  2. Hrrmmphh..she will get over him.

  3. Dragons, what wonderful words, old and elegant. :)

  4. Well, I'm off to the dictionary.

  5. Well, you certainly nailed those. Quite a scam with the meals.
    Enjoyed them - the words I mean, not the meal - didn't buy one :-)

  6. you managed to tie those 15 words together... wow!

  7. Oh this was a good read - now let me google some of those words!

  8. I loved the sly use of words as proper names.

    Clever dragons!

  9. wow, thanks for the links I didn't understand a word until I clicked them nice 55 dragons are so amazing!!

  10. Thomas Crows and Nancy Crank - very clever!

  11. I graduated with a girl named Nancy Crank...
    For Real!!
    And your 55 sounds a bit racy, but I know it's just perception...hehehehe
    Excellent job as usual Hot Breath, thank you for your support.
    Have a Great Week-End....G

  12. is he dead...why is she weeping over him..she is FREE!

  13. Well it's a darn good thing Parasite Thomas Crows gets to keep the stethoscope and library card. LOL ;-)