Flash 55-Bad Raven's words

With a nod to Raven and Quilly
( This week's Raven's words were horrible)

The star struck George Cat’s Paw Mongoose said “this place looks like a Bordello.” Not a place to stage “ The Midnight ride of Paul Revere” “ I Love Raspberry Tarts”. “ Flat Tire at First Dance”, The Crunchy Trunk” or “ Fragile Spring Fever Translation” for the global warming benefit. Quiet “she said “Eat your pancakes and syrup.”

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And Now for something completely different. A flash 55 quivel. Something that looks like a poem, uses at least three of Quilly’s words and has five words to a line for eleven lines

The End

Intransigent I’m not at all
Just unhearing to the call
invidious remarks by you made
Ruined plans I once laid
paladin I hoped to be
Once I was really free
The world needs saving true
Just give me a crew
Global Warming gone at last
When it has finally past

Then comes the real blast.

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.