Friday, May 1, 2009

Flash 55-Bad Raven's words

With a nod to Raven and Quilly
( This week's Raven's words were horrible)

The star struck George Cat’s Paw Mongoose said “this place looks like a Bordello.” Not a place to stage “ The Midnight ride of Paul Revere” “ I Love Raspberry Tarts”. “ Flat Tire at First Dance”, The Crunchy Trunk” or “ Fragile Spring Fever Translation” for the global warming benefit. Quiet “she said “Eat your pancakes and syrup.”


And Now for something completely different. A flash 55 quivel. Something that looks like a poem, uses at least three of Quilly’s words and has five words to a line for eleven lines

The End

Intransigent I’m not at all
Just unhearing to the call
invidious remarks by you made
Ruined plans I once laid
paladin I hoped to be
Once I was really free
The world needs saving true
Just give me a crew
Global Warming gone at last
When it has finally past

Then comes the real blast.

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


  1. Awesome. And I understood every word. I will have to try this quivel some time.

  2. Fandango, I had no idea so many dragons were among us. Clever 55!

  3. An enjoyable 55. Original and clever.

  4. Well... A bordello could be suitable for staging a show about tarts. But I guess I can see how the others wouldn't fit.

  5. you sure blasted me with your 55! well done!

  6. What school did you dragons go to? It must have been a good one - you're so clever! :)

  7. I love the quivel. Its nice to know that dragons are all about global warming.I hope that the fire that they spew is not full of smoke!

  8. Wow! You are a clever writer, indeed!

    Happy Friday to you!

  9. What an upbeat story!!
    Thanks for that shot of hope....
    hahahahaha...Oh Well.
    Excellent 55 Hot Breath.
    Thank for visiting others as well, it is very much appreciated.
    Have a SMOKIN Week-End.......G

  10. i just woke up from a nap, i THINK i understand it. hehe great 55 :)

  11. I had no idea dragons had a blog until this day. Thank you for the 55, well done.

  12. Wonderful 55 Fandango...Excellent

    Rabbit, rabbit